Asena is working hard to improve her sentences and paragraphs by adding more detail.
As quickly as I could, I rushed to the shops to buy my hot crunchy chips. I hurried home to watch my favourite t.v. show which is the Erin Simpson show. Foods that people on the show cook, make me hungry!
I quickly jumped out of the seat, went and got some noodles with corn beef, and gobbled it all up. It was so, so delicious!
As soon as my dad got back from work, we went to pick up my mum and straight away we went to choir.
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2 years ago
Just reading your improved sentences is making me feel hungry myself Asena. Gobbling up noodles and corn beef certainly sounds delicious.
ReplyDeleteDo you get to sing in the choir or do you just listen to the adults? I sometimes get to play my trumpet in church.