Thursday, June 10, 2010

Electrical Sparks

Isara is learning to add more detail to the beginning of his sentences...he has written one here that describes a scene shortly after an earthquake.

Minutes after an earthquake, buildings are crashing to the ground while power lines are snapping and electricity is sparking.


  1. Hey Isara,
    I like how you described how the power lines snapped and how it sparked.

    From Kaycee

  2. Hi Isara,
    I like it how you described how a earthquake hit a little town. My favourite part is when the power line snapped and when it sparked. Keep up the great work in class and keep up the great sentence as well.


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