Monday, March 1, 2010

The School Picnic

Searching for crabs is fun! Our school went to the Point England beach for a picnic. We were searching for crabs. I was carefully maneurvering over the mud because it was slippery and slimy. I almost slipped! I went into the gooey mud and it looked like clay. I found lots of little crabs and one big crab when I was searching under rocks. The big crab looked like it was going to clip me so I dropped it back into the mud. I hope that we have another school picnic soon!


  1. Hi Gianna, It sounds like you had alot of fun searching in the mud for crabs. I love the way you start your story. It made me want to read on. You use lots of interesting words and descriptions. I am thinking of you working your way through the mud. Excellent writing. I can't wait to read your next post.

  2. Hello Gianna. I really like your writing. I can imagine how slippery it must have been while you were searching for crabs. I hope we have another picnic this year too! Keep up the good writing Gianna.
    Mrs Tele'a

  3. Hello Gianna! My name is Heather Love and I am in Dr. Strange's blogging course at the University of South Alabama. Dr. Strange assigned me your blog to read this past week. I must say I really enjoyed reading your post! It's a very wise idea that you put the crab down so it didn't pinch you! I bet being on the beach was loads of fun. I haven't been in years! Keep up the good work in your writing and good luck with your future endeavors!


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