Room 12's Writing Experience
First we walked to the field and Mrs. Barks told us to lie down nice and quietly on the grass in the hot sun, and close our eyes. We had to just listen. I could hear loud sounds of clicking cicadas up in the trees, and seagulls calling. Then we moved under the trees to the nice cool shade to listen some more. I could hear much more under the trees. I could hear cicadas, seagulls crying, traffic nearby, and branches of trees swaying side to side, and then my hat blew away! Trees were waving and branches were shaking - that's how windy it was! I felt cold because it was so windy.
PES Art Expo 2022 - Room 7 Artwork
2 years ago
Kia Ora Kaycee,
ReplyDeleteThat was a great piece of writing about your experience outside. I think I saw your class outside that day. You've used lots of great ideas and interesting words. I could really see and hear what you could. Keep up the wonderful writing.
Miss Lavakula
Kaycee I think it is awesome on how good you write. I also think it is great that you get to go outside to enjoy the view and sounds. Keep up the great work!
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