Saturday, March 13, 2010


Guess What? You'll never believe it...Mrs. Barks told us to lie down on the grass on the field. We thought, "Huh? What are we going to do lying on the grass?" It seems that we were going to listen for sounds. While I was lying down on the prickly grass, I felt it tickle my skin. As I was lying down I heard crickets jumping all around over and over. I also heard seagulls calling. Then when Mrs. Barks told us to open our eyes and look at the clouds, I saw billowy clouds floating in the air. I saw a cloud that looked like a dog and one that looked like a dragon. Then Mrs. Barks said to line up and go back to class. It was fun!


  1. Hi Jouan,
    That was a great recount about your outside experience. I liked the way you've got interesting ideas and how you've used them. You've always been a great writer. Keep it up!

    From Miss Lavakula

  2. Hi! I am student at the University of South Alabama in Dr. Strange's EDM310 class. Your description of your observations is amazing. I love the title of your post too because it makes you wonder what it is really about. Your vocabulary choices are also outstanding. You seem like a really smart student. Keep up the good work!! :)


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