Saturday, March 13, 2010


On Wednesday, Room 12 went outside to lie down on the grass. The grass was so prickly that it went sticky when we were lying down. Next, we went to the shade. When we went to lie down, I said, "Paradise!"


  1. Hi Antonio,
    That was a brief but great piece of writing that you've posted on your blog. Why was it Paradise?

    I look forward to seeing more of your work.

    From Miss Lavakula

  2. This makes me want to go outside and lay in the grass right now! This was a very good description.

    I'm in Dr. Strange's EDM 310 class. I was assigned to comment on this blog for class. If you wan to see my blog you can find it at:


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