Sunday, February 21, 2010

Karen's Trip to Australia

Guess what? In the holidays, I went to this big country called Australia. In Australia it was hot and it was really, really strange. I couldn't believe it! The sun was like a toaster and it burned my whole body. Do you know who we stayed with? My mum's special friend - she has 6 kids. She had a nice house because she has an air conditioner. It was the coolest house I had ever seen. One day, all of us went to this Hot Hungry Jacks. We had chicken and a nice cold Coca-Cola drink. I went to the park of the Hungry Jacks and we played there for a little while. Then we went outside to the car. When I walked outside it was like a fire burning my feet. I was embarrassed because I had shoes but I wasn't wearing them so I had to go with hot fire feet. When we got home I felt nice and fresh when I got inside. I said to myself, "It's too hot outside." My mum's friend had a big T.V. and there were different cartoons. Some were fun to watch, but some were boring. I hate the boring cartoons but I like the fun ones.

3 comments:

  1. Hey Karen
    I really liked it when you said all those words to make it more interesing it was really good.

    From Kaycee

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  2. HI!!! PRINCESS THAT WAS A BEAUTIFUL STORY ***** KEEP IT UP DARLING IM VERY PROUD OF YOU LOVE MUM N DAD WRITE MORE STORIES .

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  3. HI! My name is Monica, and I live in the United States. I am a college student at the University of South Alabama. I really enjoyed your story. It was very descriptive and interesting. Keep up the great work!

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