Adriel wrote the following story all by herself. Her teacher helped her with the speech marks and some of the punctuation.
"Ahhhhh!" said Suzan, "My favourite pen is gone." "Suzan calm down." said her brother Omar with a kind voice. "No it's the day things start disappearing." Suzan replied. "Suzan it's a mystery and when we find that pen of yours you can get back to your drawings." "Thanks Omar." said Suzan hugging him with love. Suzan and Omar searched everywhere in the house and they didn't find it.
But Omar saw drool coming out of Suzan's drawing box. "I have a clue it must be our dog Pluto." So they went to the garden where Pluto was and he had nothing on him. So they checked every hole Pluto dug in the garden but nothing was to be found except stinky old bones.
Suzan thought of something "Oh silly old me I forgot." "What did you forget?" "I forgot I gave it to my friend so tomorrow she can give it to me." "So we went all through that for nothing." said Omar. So Omar slammed the door and went to sleep.
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