Amber and Adriel took the sentence ...I saw a monkey....and changed it so it was an exclamation and then again so it was speech. They also added some details to make it more interesting for the reader. Check out their ideas.
Wow I just saw a monkey!
I just saw a monkey around the corner!
"I spied a monkey in the middle of the tree eating a bunch of yellow bananas!" said the old lady.
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