Wednesday, February 29, 2012

My Mum Was Not Delighted

1 comment:

  1. I like the way you spoke with expression and used lots of detail in your story. To make your work even better, maybe next time you could tell us more about why your mum wasn't delighted. Thank you for sharing your work.

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