tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4526576355229597893.post3465535105336370754..comments2023-05-17T03:51:04.743+12:00Comments on We've Got The Write Stuff: My Mum Was Not DelightedPES Blog Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10430434432980030044noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4526576355229597893.post-46406328501039951752012-03-22T14:15:02.502+13:002012-03-22T14:15:02.502+13:00I like the way you spoke with expression and used ...I like the way you spoke with expression and used lots of detail in your story. To make your work even better, maybe next time you could tell us more about why your mum wasn't delighted. Thank you for sharing your work.Paris, Adriel, Amberhttp://pesburne.blogspot.co.nz/noreply@blogger.com