Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Drifted Away

Realizing that the ship had drifted away, he commanded his crew to bury the gold and silver. Some of his mighty men chopped driftwood to build a strong raft so they could paddle out to find their ships. Digging out the treasure, they dragged it on to the ship.


  1. Wow Asena that is a cool story.You put in their good topic sentencses and you also put lots of details. Asena you did put some effort in that work. From Mary V

  2. What a fun beginning to an amazing story! My name is Shellie and I am a college student in the United States. I really enjoy seeing students such as yourself, using technology to write such captivating stories. I wonder who came up with the idea to start this story? I hope that there are more stories to come. This story makes me want to put on a pirate's hat.


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