Thursday, May 20, 2010

Esrah - Errupting Volcano

3 comments:

  1. Hi Esrah
    Awesome Movie. Great writing to. It's cool how you describe things like the lava one. Anyways keep up the good work and writing.

    Crusader

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  2. Hi Esrah,
    I really liked the way you used similes to describe what lava is like. Great descriptions Esrah! I would really like to hear your comparisons of what smoke and ash is like too. You have a very clear voice when presenting your work and you also spoke with a beautiful smile.
    Well done Esrah, keep up the good work.
    Love mum

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  3. Hi Esrah,
    I love all the interesting vocab you have used to explain how you feel.
    You spoke really clear even clearer than my brother speaks. You also had a very beautiful smile. Keep up the good work.
    From Makerita

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