When Mrs Barks was teaching at Pt England School this was her class blog.
Wow Jouan! I really enjoyed listening to what you wrote. That last sentence had lots of detail, I liked the way you said "fiery burning waterfall" that's a very good description of lava. You've always been a really good writer. Keep it up. I look forward to reading more of your stories.From Miss Lavakula
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