Thursday, May 20, 2010

Esrah - Errupting Volcano


  1. Hi Esrah
    Awesome Movie. Great writing to. It's cool how you describe things like the lava one. Anyways keep up the good work and writing.


  2. Hi Esrah,
    I really liked the way you used similes to describe what lava is like. Great descriptions Esrah! I would really like to hear your comparisons of what smoke and ash is like too. You have a very clear voice when presenting your work and you also spoke with a beautiful smile.
    Well done Esrah, keep up the good work.
    Love mum

  3. Hi Esrah,
    I love all the interesting vocab you have used to explain how you feel.
    You spoke really clear even clearer than my brother speaks. You also had a very beautiful smile. Keep up the good work.
    From Makerita


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