Wednesday, October 17, 2012

Macaroni and Cheese

Brooklyn and Sohel worked together with Mrs. Barks to write a story to go with the picture of Brooklyn and his lunch.

Mmmmm...macaroni and favourite meal. Sometimes I like to order it from the tuck shop at school for my lunch. I opened the dish, ready for a delicious snack and the cheesy aroma filled the air. My mouth began to water. As quickly as I could, I gobbled it was magnificent.


  1. Hi boys,

    It was great brainstorming ideas with you for your story today. I think that you managed to come up with some terrific vocabulary and your sentences definitely keep the audience interested.

  2. Hi Mrs Barks and Boys,

    I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story, just reading it made my mouth water, well done!!

    Thank you Mrs Barks for posting this wonderful story. Also love the photo!!

  3. Hi Ms barks ,

    Brooklyn N thats really great and a lovly and thats the best lunnch ever ok

    Thank you for that Pichter .

    love April lotts of love

  4. Hi Room 12,
    Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, this story made me want something to eat. I really like macaroni and cheese. I can't wait to read more intersting post. Keep up the great work!!!



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